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Thursday, 19 August 2010 20:03

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I wrote something on the banjo! Haven't done that in a while... I put the drone string in C, gets to be a lot of nose, so I kinda think it needs a base and something else to give it more rhythm.

The guitar part is not right at all, needs a lot more work. But the idea is there.

If anyone wants to work on this with me or has any suggestions let me know.

 
 

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0 #1 dats4sure 2010-09-13 17:53
The intro sounds sick. I like the C too. The guitar seems to compete with it though. Rather than creating a nice place to fill in the holes, it hammers on the delicacy of the banjo melody. Try open chords and let them breathe.
You can tell you want that bass sound by the deepness of the guitar chords. Maybe play the bass line before throwing all the guitar in there.
You have a nice little ditty here! Please to share the chords with us.
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